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the only answer we will ever need

While it may often seem  

Like we are drowning 

Alone in a sea of faces 

It has been whispered 

Throughout time and space 

That under the cool hope of spring 

We will turn our heads 

Like so many beautiful flowers  

Towards the true god 

The shining sun 

And music will fill our ears 

Blossoms will burst forth from our bleary eyes 

We will kneel before the question of infinity 

And the answer will be love.

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◄ it was an accident

like skin upon my bones ►

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<Deleted User> (13762)

Fri 3rd Mar 2017 09:00

I try to avoid saying oh this poem reminds me of something I wrote but in this case I feel there is some slight connection with my last offering here - maybe they have similar endings or hopes. Who knows, I'm still not fully awake, it's raining and I have much to do today which I am putting off by lingering here. Quality writing Stu as always. Cheers, Col

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suki spangles

Fri 3rd Mar 2017 05:32

Amen, Stu.

Suki

elPintor

Fri 3rd Mar 2017 01:25

The analogy of being, with that of a flower, is so entirely apt to me. We are such moody creatures and could not deny that our faith (in whatever form it exists) waxes and wanes in cycles. It seems all doomed to death and cyclical resurrection.

elP

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Paul Waring

Thu 2nd Mar 2017 13:21

Stu, how wonderfully well the range of your writing takes us from deadly dark and mysterious to delicate and beautiful, which this poem is. You old romantic you ?

Paul

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