The Crimson King
The Crimson King with cloak of blood
Struts across the killing floor
His face a mask of agony
His flesh much scarred and smeared with gore
His broken bones bleached by the sun
Protrude through skin now parchment thin
His eyes are sunken and gone black
He pays eternal for his sin
He once was young and once was fair
Stood tall and smart in glinting gold
A godlike man with power to wield
His heart still pure, his soul not sold
His kingdom knew good fortune then
Led by one who was wise and young
His subjects loyal loved their king
In his praise their songs were sung
He dwelled back then, the Crimson King
Inside a palace crystal clear
That stood atop the highest peak
The valley and its people, dear
To the monarch’s heart, he could survey
Guarding them through blackest night
And watching o’er them through the day
His faithful subjects n’er knew fright
His reign had reached its fifteenth year
When up the hill the king espied
A stranger clad in robes of black
A fiery sword burned by his side
His snakelike hair writhed in the wind
His blind eyes stared blank from his head
But still his gaze filled all with dread
King Crimson tore himself away
Those deep dead eyes he could not meet
They drew him in and held him tight
And made his heart freeze beat on beat
But then a voice spoke in his mind
Quiet and unheeded yet, however
Saying in this man the king might glory find
And keep hold of his power forever
The guards stood resolute by the gate
Its crystal locks and bolts were barred
A breath of air could not have gained
Entrance to the king’s courtyard
Atop the highest turret stood
The shivering frame of the Crimson King
His heart was pumping icy blood
When a thin cracked voice began to sing
‘My Lord,’ the voice rang in his ears
The king spun round upon his heels
Again the voice rang high and clear,
‘I am no vision, I am quite real.’
The phantom’s skeletal fingers gripped
A sword who’s blade was flaming blue
The Crimson King stepped back and slipped
This was no mortal man he knew
He made to bid his guards to come
But from his lips no sound was heard
Believing that he was undone
His tunic torn, his chest laid bare
The Crimson king knelt down
The stranger’s laugh was paper thin
As he saw the king’s face frown
‘I mean no harm,’ Came a whispered grin,
‘I offer you eternity, never ending power
Simply take this sword from me
And henceforth from this hour
From laws your reign it shall be free.’
An evil rose in Crimson’s heart
An urge, a grim and dark desire
To rule as one who’s set apart
To rule with blood and iron and fire
His flesh was seared as he grasped the sword
He felt the dark power surge
‘Your soul must pay the price it owes.’
The stranger’s voice was heard
Then all at once and laughing still
The phantom form began to fade
It started to shrink and shimmer until
The king stood all alone and dazed
And so began the king’s new reign
One clothed in blood and broken bones
Feasting on his subject’s pain
Their corpses filling countless tombs
Eternity was the king’s reward
Its price, now paid, was much too high
To lead his subjects in endless wars
The king was deafened by their cries
But then with all his subjects dead
King Crimson fought the war alone
The blows rained down upon his head
And shattered all his bones
And gouged and tore into his flesh
But this king who could not die
Rose up time on time again
And raised his battle cry
The Crimson King with cloak of blood
Struts across the killing floor
His face a mask of agony
His flesh much scarred and smeared with gore
His broken bones bleached by the sun
Protrude through skin now parchment thin
His eyes are sunken and gone black
He pays eternal for his sin
<Deleted User> (5646)
Wed 23rd Sep 2009 13:16
It's a very powerful write for me.
I agree with Nicky with regards to a few stumbles in the early part of the write but it picks up a great rhythm towards the middle and on to the end. Really enjoyed reading this. :-)
Janet.x