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'In Budapest' by Hazel Ettridge is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week

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‘In Budapest’ by Hazel Ettridge is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week. Hazel says that it was written in “a seedy hotel room” in the Hungarian capital, “having returned from an evening exploring this exciting and exotic city”. The poem talks of “the thrill / Of running down a street / Lit only by cafe glow”. It’s Budapest – but it could be many other places, too. On her Write Out Loud profile page Hazel says: "I write fragments and some of them feel true. Some of them are beautiful to me. All of them come from a place that I might call 'home'."

 

How long has poetry been an important part of your life and can you remember why it became so?

Poetry was a mystery to me as a child - I loved rhythm and rhyme, but the content was often too obscure for my little brain to appreciate. As I have grown old, I love poems that reflect the human condition with honesty, beauty and humour (many examples to be found on the Write Out Loud blog).

 

Can you remember the first poem that you wrote?

I wrote my first poem when my heart was broken for the first time. This was followed by many more poems of the “heartbreak” variety. Thank goodness I have moved on!

 

If you could only have one poet’s work to read which one would you choose?

My favourite poet at the moment is Mary Oliver. She has a relationship with nature that is so intimate - no romance or sentiment, no froth or frills - just absolutely real.

 

Do you perform your work and if so, what advice would you give to a other young poets just starting out?

I don’t perform my work. Joining Write Out Loud is my first venture into sharing my poems.

 

 What was the inspiration for this poem's title?

'In Budapest' was written in a seedy hotel room in Budapest. I was just trying to capture my feelings having returned from an evening exploring this exciting and exotic city.

 

What would your desert island luxury be?

A coffee maker - I could treat myself to caffeine shots while writing poems in the sand.

 

IN BUDAPEST

by Hazel Ettridge

 

Ah, the thrill

Of running down a street

Lit only by cafe glow

To see a dog 

Taking a pee

And bundles in doorways

That are sleeping men

Ah, the thrill

Of running down a street

Where students  smoke 

and taxis speed by

Or wait for fares

Where the smell of pancakes

And curry mixes

With the rubbish of the day

Ah, the thrill

Of running down a street

And yes, I admit to

Feeling a little afraid

Of men just standing and

Men just turning away

And dark alleys

Where muffled music plays

And sounds of life

Come in short gasps

Ah, the thrill

the thrill of running

Running down a street

In Budapest

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Comments

Travis Brow

Wed 8th Mar 2017 06:43

Congratulations Hazel; there's something of Eliot in this.

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Graham Sherwood

Mon 6th Mar 2017 09:14

Hazel you have managed that rare thing of making us care about the person in the poem. We being by sharing your pleasure at discovering this city and then feel anxious as you feel slightly threatened by the more subversive elements that you discover.

I liked this from the moment you posted it. Well done on making POTW.

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Mon 6th Mar 2017 08:49

Yes, well done Hazel. I've had such a busy weekend I feel I am still catching up. I've been enjoying your contributions since you joined WoL and look forward to reading many more. All the very best, Colin

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Raj Ferds

Mon 6th Mar 2017 07:31

Well done Hazel on being picked as the winner of POTW.
Truly deserved. That piece was exceptional.

Raj

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Paul Waring

Sun 5th Mar 2017 17:43

Congratulations Hazel, your delightful poem is a worthy winner of POTW.

Paul

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Martin Elder

Sun 5th Mar 2017 14:21

Hi Hazel

I have never been to Budapest but from what I have seen and heard it sounds a great place to visit. Your poem certainly brings the place alive. I love your enthusiasm, particularly with your repeated line of
'oh the thrill of running down the street' which works well and certainly gives it something of a pace.
congrat's on POTW

Nice one

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M.C. Newberry

Sun 5th Mar 2017 12:39

A stimulating contrast to the view of my brother-in-law -
recently returned from a stay in that city and says he
wouldn't go again.

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suki spangles

Sun 5th Mar 2017 11:45

Hi Hazel,

First of all, congratulations on winning POTW. I must have missed this one. I also enjoyed "I'm Ready if You Are" - another fine poem. I'll check out your other ones.

Nice one!

Suki

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