'In Budapest' by Hazel Ettridge is Write Out Loud Poem of the Week
‘In Budapest’ by Hazel Ettridge is Write Out Loud’s Poem of the Week. Hazel says that it was written in “a seedy hotel room” in the Hungarian capital, “having returned from an evening exploring this exciting and exotic city”. The poem talks of “the thrill / Of running down a street / Lit only by cafe glow”. It’s Budapest – but it could be many other places, too. On her Write Out Loud profile page Hazel says: "I write fragments and some of them feel true. Some of them are beautiful to me. All of them come from a place that I might call 'home'."
How long has poetry been an important part of your life and can you remember why it became so?
Poetry was a mystery to me as a child - I loved rhythm and rhyme, but the content was often too obscure for my little brain to appreciate. As I have grown old, I love poems that reflect the human condition with honesty, beauty and humour (many examples to be found on the Write Out Loud blog).
Can you remember the first poem that you wrote?
I wrote my first poem when my heart was broken for the first time. This was followed by many more poems of the “heartbreak” variety. Thank goodness I have moved on!
If you could only have one poet’s work to read which one would you choose?
My favourite poet at the moment is Mary Oliver. She has a relationship with nature that is so intimate - no romance or sentiment, no froth or frills - just absolutely real.
Do you perform your work and if so, what advice would you give to a other young poets just starting out?
I don’t perform my work. Joining Write Out Loud is my first venture into sharing my poems.
What was the inspiration for this poem's title?
'In Budapest' was written in a seedy hotel room in Budapest. I was just trying to capture my feelings having returned from an evening exploring this exciting and exotic city.
What would your desert island luxury be?
A coffee maker - I could treat myself to caffeine shots while writing poems in the sand.
IN BUDAPEST
by Hazel Ettridge
Ah, the thrill
Of running down a street
Lit only by cafe glow
To see a dog
Taking a pee
And bundles in doorways
That are sleeping men
Ah, the thrill
Of running down a street
Where students smoke
and taxis speed by
Or wait for fares
Where the smell of pancakes
And curry mixes
With the rubbish of the day
Ah, the thrill
Of running down a street
And yes, I admit to
Feeling a little afraid
Of men just standing and
Men just turning away
And dark alleys
Where muffled music plays
And sounds of life
Come in short gasps
Ah, the thrill
the thrill of running
Running down a street
In Budapest
Travis Brow
Wed 8th Mar 2017 06:43
Congratulations Hazel; there's something of Eliot in this.