The Devil On My Right Shoulder
The Devil On My Right Shoulder
it might be snowing outside
if I could be bothered
a girl with red lipstick
could be kissing my cheek
the sky could be filled
with ants on the wing
silver fish
darting in foam
at the foot of a black mountain
we could be counting stars
riding a Ferris wheel
licking sweat
from thighs of gold
the days could last
for weeks on end
the nights
could be over in seconds
light could bounce
from lofty castles
dancers spinning
until their colours blur
like paints
under a paintbrush
a kiss
could feel
like a punch
painful and delicious
I could sell you
a tale so thrilling
that you would
lose your breath
and wish
for surrender
and we could do all this
me and the screen of white
but today
we just want
to be left alone
and let imagination
remain tied up
like a dark dog
in a dark dank dungeon
of self doubt
where the devil
on my right shoulder
whispers his sweet nothings
to my soul
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Tue 2nd May 2017 19:46
I liked the line 'I could SELL you/a tale so thrilling' a really discordant 'jab' which put a whole different complexion on the poet's seeming intent, yet jives excellently with the title.
Would you clue me in on the choice of '' 'right' shoulder'', since I think it is very intentional? I can speculate on many versions of 'right'; which may be the point.