The Echoes poetry competition to celebrate Write Out Loud's 20th anniversary is now open.  Judged by Neil Astley.

Competition closes in 8 days, 22 hours. Get details and Enter.

Coffee Mugs

Our love is made of coffee mugs,

A house that isn’t big enough,

And all these happy, autumn thoughts;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love is fire, slow with need,

A never-aging willow tree,

And here is where I’ll never leave;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love is necessary air,

A spark that makes judgment impaired,

It’s a perfect little love affair;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love is fading, burning out,

A candle flame under a cloud,

My insides are breaking, screaming out;

When you are here with me.

 

Our love has went and walked away,

A gypsy gone before mid-day,

My mouth now has nothing to say;

Except that you aren’t here.

🌷(2)

◄ I'll Drive

He's Different Now ►

Comments

Profile image

Raj Ferds

Tue 14th Mar 2017 07:21

Hi Rachel, I didn't expect that finale. But the way life is the old coffee mug will be replaced with a new one. I hope.

Nice one.
Raj x

Sylvie

Tue 14th Mar 2017 06:21

Oh my goodness. I did not see that coming. I was settling in for a cute love story. Heartbreaking. Well done. ?

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses only functional cookies that are essential to the operation of the site. We do not use cookies related to advertising or tracking. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message