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He's Different Now

The echoes of her woes,

they sharpen like the knives of the ones that wounded

her war scars;

they deepen.

 

Some nights she’ll lie awake,

much like the lies that he fed to her through a spoon

down her throat;

she suffers.

 

The demon inside him,

It is the same demon that married her although

now he sits;

without guilt.

 

And now his eyes stay dark,

Without a shadow of the love he claimed, present

In the black-

of his soul. 

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AM Cash

Wed 22nd Mar 2017 22:59

Wow ...this is powerful

<Deleted User> (13762)

Wed 15th Mar 2017 07:44

very good - deserves to be read slowly. Thanks for posting Rachel.

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