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From Out Of Nowhere

they warned us 

it was coming


okay, I thought

this time 

I'll be ready 


so I waited

and watched

and waited

 

but there was no sign of it

 

until 

the moment

I turned my back


and suddenly 

there it was


out of nowhere

back from hiding

who-knows-where

 

and there was I

again agog

cleverly out-witted 

by the cunning fog

 

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◄ Memory Thief

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Paul Waring

Sat 25th Mar 2017 10:06

Thanks David, you know, when there is fog on the Mersey the sound of the foghorns makes it amazingly atmospheric.

That Crowded House track is a classic. I find it so interesting how poems can put people in mind of songs, images, memories, etc...things that we as the writer didn't see or envisage. The power and beauty of language, eh?

So sorry for the late reply and thanks again for reading and commenting.

Paul

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Fri 17th Mar 2017 08:18

your absence has been noted Waring. Buck up your ideas and stop blaming t'internet lad ?

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Paul Waring

Thu 16th Mar 2017 21:34

Hi friends, so sorry for not commenting for a few days, due to no internet connection, fingers crossed it's sorted soon!

Hope you are all well ?

Missing you, Paul

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