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Memory Thief

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in the cold light of contemplation

the past slips in and out of focus

from cubby-holes of consciousness

hiding the known from the knowing


dropping hints that tease the tip of 

the tongue with a taste of familiarity

and no more, laughing at our futile

attempts to fill the recollection plate
 

with titbits, the residue of memory 

traces pinched by thieving magpies

of recall, who feed on facts until

cohesive details become slivers


contained in a concertinaed, wafer-

thin file of crumbs from the feast of 

our feats, responding vaguely, like 

strangers waiting to be introduced

 

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Paul Waring

Sat 25th Mar 2017 09:55

Thank you elP, I enjoyed listening to and watching the Neko Case video. I'm so pleased that you think it has a Radiohead feel, they are a band I have long admired.

Sorry this reply has taken so long, I've been so busy with the move back to the UK. Thanks again for commenting, hope all is well with you.

Paul

elPintor

Sat 18th Mar 2017 00:24

Hi, Paul..I read this when you first posted it while on my lunch break at work and it's remained with me since. There isn't much that I can say that hasn't already been said in the comments, but it does have a Radiohead sort of feel.

..this song came to mind when reading. It's only loosely related, but I hope you like it anyhow..

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=WkKbRslydU0

elP

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Mar 2017 22:31

Frances and Col, thank you both so much for reading and commenting. I am so pleased you liked this.

Paul

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Tue 14th Mar 2017 20:26

coming late in the day to this one Paul it seems all the best comments have been taken so I will just add that I like this very much and echo Frances' words: So much to like here...

Col

Frances Macaulay Forde

Tue 14th Mar 2017 18:28

So much to like here...

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Mar 2017 18:02

Thanks Ray, Suki and Raj, so pleased that you enjoyed reading this and for making interesting comments, you are all very kind. Memory is a such an interesting and mysterious subject, isn't it?

And thanks too Adam and MGS for the likes.

I'm very grateful to you all.

Paul

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Raj Ferds

Tue 14th Mar 2017 15:58

Brilliant Paul. It still resonates within me "from cubby-holes of consciousness".

Quite meditative.

Raj

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suki spangles

Tue 14th Mar 2017 15:45

Hi Paul,

A kind of kissing cousin of "Deja vu all over again". The nature of memory and recalling the memory of a memory. I think we have discussed this before - or have we..

Suki

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raypool

Tue 14th Mar 2017 14:06

HI Paul. I'm often guilty of indulging myself in the impression that a poem gives me and expressing that to the exclusion of a more serious approach, which of course you do offer here including some excellent salient points of reference to that illusive faculty of memory, clouded as it is by emotional overlayers and sub texts.
My impression having said all that is one of early onset....
(just joking of course). ay ay...

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Paul Waring

Tue 14th Mar 2017 11:38

Thanks David for your compliments and insightful comments about mind and memory. I have always been fascinated by the process of memory. And you're right we often fill in the gaps with imagined (and embellished) memories that often seem real and true. But conversely, as I'm sure you already know about PTSD, sometimes the memories are permanently vivid with every minute detail.

Re: the homecoming... it feels great so far, despite all the upheaval. You are very thoughtful to mention it and I appreciate that very much David.

Thanks Hazel, I really appreciate (and relate to) your comment. Much appreciated.

Thanks to you both, Paul

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Hazel ettridge

Tue 14th Mar 2017 09:46

I love it Paul. I feel led by your images but not directed by them if that makes sense. And I relate to the experience - my mind feels like a very worn Persian rug sometimes.

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