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Lizzie by night

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That second Lizzie
That once in a life second
The way you laughed that night
The way you fetched service
The way you looked- this easy...

The way you knew who we were that night
The way you were followed by all
The way you were trailed by me
The way you were sure of this and that
The way you were so easy to be
So very easy In my company...

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 24th Sep 2009 20:31

my head is in repair
my tracer lights are
darkly throwing;
my head was in dispair
my eons in time were
sparkly glowing.

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Tommy Carroll

Thu 24th Sep 2009 20:19

20:20

<Deleted User> (5646)

Thu 24th Sep 2009 19:15

Have i seen this before?
Like it anyway. Simply put but eloquently too in my opinion.

Janet.x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 24th Sep 2009 17:44

A great presentation of that unique 'once in a lifetime second'. What a super way to say the almost inexpressible.

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