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Melatonin

Sometimes I wake up

at 3 am

because I have nightmares

that you tell me you're sorry.

I'm not scared of your apologies,

I'm scared because you lie.

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Maria Renea

Thu 30th Mar 2017 19:27

thank you!

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Stu Buck

Thu 30th Mar 2017 17:16

brief and to the point. very good writing.

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