Home Front (part 4)
Thank you for sticking with me, if you read this it's going to be some time before I post anything new, from start to finish with a bit of a break this has taken quite a while! I would love to organise a performance but I've no idea how to go about it, I imagine a friendly pub on a winter's evening, log fire casting shadows on the walls, a pint, obviously, beyond that I've no idea - anyone help?
CLOVERLEAF: Then our nation must grow strong
A sapling grows without support
We’ll start afresh and put right wrong
And no longer the truth distort
A phoenix from the flames can be reborn
So shall our people rise up from the ashes
Loss of the Sentinel we all will mourn
Though a vision before me now flashes
Of a land that’s hopeful, confident and brave
That puts down arms, embracing peace
Though many have gone to their graves
Brave comrades who are now deceased
Revenge and hatred’s put aside
All acts of violence have ceased
No longer slaves to our blind pride
At last we killed that perfidious beast
Here we come to the end of the line
Our trip was short in miles maybe
But far we came in heart and mind
A journey that has set us free
There’s crowds there waiting for their kin
Rejoicing, see them weep and wave
Come comrade slap my back and grin
Be glad that we were spared the grave
Gather up your kit, pass me your bundle
This carriage I am more than keen to leave
What is it in these rags that you must fondle?
Come hurry, of your burden I’ll relieve
(STRONGARM holds tightly onto his bundle of rags and will not give them up to CLOVERLEAF)
STRONGARM: Hold him tight and don’t let go
Hold him tight and don’t let go
I had to bear this lost lamb home
Could not abandon him to fate
Leaving him behind alone
Would bring on shame too great
This cruel world’s no hold on him
I know he feels no pain
But still it would have been a sin
Had I not carried his remains
He can rest easy, be at peace
He may know home grows near
His suffering has finally ceased
He’s conquered death and fear
He that was a creature
Too fragile for this world
With his brightly coloured wings
As broken as his dreams
Through weight of care
And life's cruel burdens
That crushed the breath
From a loving innocent
Who may perhaps now know
The peace much longed for
When he lived
(A small group of ragged people wait on the platform. CLOVERLEAF helps STRONGARM out of the carriage. For a moment they are disorientated then a woman comes over to CLOVERLEAF, puts her arms around him and leads him away. Gradually the platform empties, leaving STRONGARM standing alone holding his ragged bundle, tears rolling down his cheeks. He does not move. The lights slowly dim to blackness.)
WAR: I have returned, a fiend from Hell
To survey all my work
And mighty pleased am I
By what I see upon the Earth
In this nation’s cold, grey rain
The dead rise from their graves
Their bones borne by their relatives
With senses numbed by grief and pain
No victors were there in this war
No victors now in peace
And now I rub my hands with glee
I offer no relief
For though I relish violence
And those who take up arms
My first love is intolerance
It drove these people from their homes
Before they left their final act
In defeat on foreign ground
Was to take with them their kindred dead
Their broken bones in rags were bound
So all that stood I have destroyed
My monstrous work is done
My eyes they turn to other lands
Where I can have my fun
(The lights are raised and NARRATOR returns to the stage.)
NARRATOR: I gazed at the gravestones of those who had died
Their names, ranks and ages carved into the stone
I read the inscription that made the girl cry
I felt a great sadness that here lay the bones
Of brave comrade soldiers who’d never go home
With the rain’s ceasing a rainbow erupted
Embracing a sky so clear, blue and bright
Bringing fresh hope of a new world tomorrow
A world in which men had learned how not to fight
Then with the dream over I entered the light
Anthony Emmerson
Mon 28th Sep 2009 00:00
Hi Neil,
Finally got here! Well, it's an ambitious piece, that's for sure! Kind of "Shakespeare meets The Lord of the Rings." I'm wondering what you would like your potential audience to take from this - i.e. the "message" of the piece? What were your influences in writing it and why did you choose this particular style? I'm a little hesitant to offer any depth of comment prior to having some understanding of your intentions. Enjoyable and different read though!
Regards,
A.E.