Donegal Eden
An island Eden
Cut off whenever high tide
Covered the causeway.
A made-to-measure retreat
Out of sight of prying eyes.
The tide receded
We drove across the wet strand
Parking among dunes.
Our van inadvertently
Bedded in axle-deep sand.
It stuck fast. Fiz laughed.
We drank a bottle of rum.
Watching the sun set
Over Árainn Mhór. Blowing
Kisses at the Milky Way.
A wave smoothed rock pool
Waist deep. Fresh spring water filled.
Heated by the sun
Offering hours of delight
Became our hot tub, lido, spa.
We lived like sand boys
Happy, naked and drunken
Running and swimming
Campfire singing and dancing,
Loving. Lost in each other.
At holiday’s end
A local towed the van free.
He refused a ‘drink’.
Tapping his wallet, all smiles,
“These photos of you will do.”
Driving home silent
Leaving Donegal behind
Was hard for us both
Fiz said, “Bye” at Biggleswade
I never saw her again.
I heard she’s wed now
With a son, The spit of me.
I wrote, no replies.
I hope she remembers us
On our beach in paradise.
Rick Gammon
Thu 6th Apr 2017 08:49
Thanks - the tanka syllable protocol helps focus the mind - I do free verse but now and again feel a bit o'discipline cannot go amiss.
The main thrust of the pome is true - we had no children issuing from our brief liaison ?