I don't get it. I don't get it
but what is there to get?
brainwashed snow white
Sprinkled with truth but
it's all lies. They all die
perishing for lack of...
ellipsis but nothing is
omitted. they shut the
truth into the closet and
spread that blah blah blah
fake news - nothing new
same ol', same ol' cliche
''I have a dream...''
King, wake up!
<Deleted User> (13762)
Mon 10th Apr 2017 09:06
nice one Juan, good to see you posting. Col
This is a wonderfully in your face piece of poetry which seems to have a good pace. I love the final lines
'I have a dream...wake up king'
Fabulous
Powerball
Mon 10th Apr 2017 08:18
Great writing,
Keep it up dude
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Juan Pablo Lynch
Tue 11th Apr 2017 15:45
Thanks for the feedback everyone.
Col, it feels good to be posting. I write on a daily basis but I haven't found the time to post recently.
Martin, I surprised myself with the flow of this poem and I almost didn't write the last two lines...glad you liked it.
Powerball, once again thanks for the compliment