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THE GIRL FROM GALLIENI

THE GIRL FROM GALLIENI

 

The town looks run-down

this rainy weekday morning;

a single street climbing

to nowhere special,

an old boulangerie,

some sleepy Asian shops

but the church door

extends an invitation

so I step inside to breathe

the incensed silence

of wood and alcoves

 

then without a word

a vagrant poet appears

from behind the church,

his limbs stiff from months 

of Paris and park benches,

crosses the square to where

a brunette in a saucy dress

is already laying out

the tarnished cutlery for lunch

plus a napkin on every table.

He orders coffee, dips

into a rucksack for Aragon

but can't take his eyes

from those plump thighs

as she stretches over tables,

a suburban orchid

riding youth

and caring not a damn

for this situation

or the dark interior

of steam, news reports

and poverty at the bar.

 

Published in The French Literary Review. Issue 27. April 2017

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raypool

Wed 12th Apr 2017 22:19

I enjoyed the subtlety and directness together and the spot on atmosphere, finally collapsing on a sequence of thoughts.
Lovely sleaziness and a sort of wonderment.

Ray

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Wed 12th Apr 2017 12:41

Much enjoyed. I like the way it probes like an all-seeing camera, through sight into situation into soul. I can see why it's published.

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Wed 12th Apr 2017 09:09

this is really very good and takes me back to my own poetic excursions to Paris. I particularly like the vagrant poet and the brunette, plump thighs and all. I'd be tempted to take them off somewhere to explore a different side of the suburbs. Good work John. Thanks for posting.
Colin
btw, really liked your History Lesson sample poem.

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