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Ah … the primitive id

buried drive of sex and aggression

so thinly civilized

our basic Beast growling

claw flexing, eye fixing

ready to pounce

in dreams

slips of the tongue

flashing anger

free association

 

In Art -

shadows in a painting

tone of a story

plumb stone of a poem

architect's angles

bass pacing heart beat -

subplots in metaphor

wooing this id

from our subconscious

 

Who dares presume

that Power is a licence

to ravage peoples

and rubbish cities

to demean human dignity

engorging the latent Animal

from histories uncharted!

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Stu Buck

Mon 24th Apr 2017 16:31

love it cynthia, so powerful and such wise words.

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Paul Waring

Mon 24th Apr 2017 00:02

Hi Cynthia, like Martin I haven't read this before either and I enjoyed it very much. Powerful writing!

Paul

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Martin Elder

Sun 23rd Apr 2017 17:38

Well old or not Cynthia I for one haven't read it before and I love it. It certainly seems to fit the bill as what you describe is timeless like this poem. I particularly like
'love stone of a poem'
wonderful stuff

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 23rd Apr 2017 14:51

A re-post from years ago. I hope I can be forgiven. I cannot count the hours I have worked on this work this past week. My eldest grand-daughter is studying this subject, revising like mad. I just happened to overhear part of a review session, and I remembered this 'effort' from ages ago. So I pulled it out, to see if she might even enjoy a read - empathy - whatever. And I didn't quite like what I had. Anyway, here it is again - and my brain is fried!

I might even let you know if she gives it the time of day. I'm not holding my breath. Aren't I brave!

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