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6 x Short Poems wrote while watching the film 'The Sense of an ending')

(I)

Your eyes linger
In a pause
Before dissolving into black.

(II)

Taking some time out
Your diary misses day out
Almost like it has a mind of its own.

(III)

Not being familiar with Dylan Thomas’s work
You are happy drinking
Your own masterpieces.

(IV)

Counting shadows
Postcards carry feelings
Whether at the beginning
Of the end of the journey.

(V)

Closing circles in boxes
A short ciruit
Becomes a rainstorm
And a game of chess
Feels like dominos

(VI)

Commenting on memories
Each reflection
Is as much a ripple in the ocean
As much as a thought. 

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Andy N

Wed 26th Apr 2017 18:46

thanks Stu. glad you like it. Worth watching the film - the Dylan Thomas bit defo makes sense within the context of the film too.

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Stu Buck

Wed 26th Apr 2017 16:11

agreed, 3 is excellent!

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Andy N

Wed 26th Apr 2017 15:46

thanks Linda. All of the poems were reactions really to what i saw in the film. wasn't a perfect film but Jim Broadbent is a great actor (:

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Linda Cosgriff

Tue 25th Apr 2017 12:07

I really like (III).

All of these have your voice coming through loud and clear.

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