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Only The Lonely Hear Górecki

only the lonely lie wide awake 

 

staring through windows

in the Great Bed Of Ware 

 

wondering and wandering

boulevards of broken dreams

 

walking backwards through time

searching for love in a crowd of one

 

wearing hopes that don't fit

a symphony of sorrowful songs

 

and ache like empty cases

dragged around deserted airports

 

a black box of pain

aboard a missing flight

 

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Paul Waring

Wed 3rd May 2017 08:28

Thanks David for the encouraging comment.

And no probs re: timing, I think a lot of us have been distracted over the BH weekend. Hopefully, normal service is about to resume!

Hope all is well with you.

Paul

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Paul Waring

Tue 2nd May 2017 17:26

Cheers for the praise Stu and for giving the title the thumbs-up!

I'm most grateful to you.

Paul

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Stu Buck

Tue 2nd May 2017 15:21

great poem paul and the title is a killer!

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Paul Waring

Tue 2nd May 2017 09:33

Thank you Dom, Col and Jemima, you have all written such touching comments.

Paul

Jemima Jones

Mon 1st May 2017 14:33

Oh! 'symphony of sorrowful songs' a real gut wrencher! Sadly beautiful poem Paul.Thank you.Jemima.

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Mon 1st May 2017 12:04

Gosh this is quite simply astoundingly good Paul - from the Big O beginning to that airport finale - a complete tour de force of loneliness.
Col.

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Dominic James

Mon 1st May 2017 10:52

searching for love in a crowd of one, is the wise, sad phrase for me. keep em coming!
Dom.

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