This becca highlight
1993, and modern renaissance
Beauty blender and soft focus primer
Lol
No remedy
No pleasure
Same pain, this disguise
So much work
Blend and blend
I'm still the same
100 dollars wiped away
Wish it would wipe this pain away
What a waste
Stupid mask
Stupid me
I know they see,
See this fraud
See this pathetic little me
So fucking old
Should have sun-screened more
Hyperpigmented, dehydrated
Elle perfected
<Deleted User> (13762)
Fri 5th May 2017 08:19
again another good poem but I would suggest losing the 'pain' line as there is enough pain on display in all the other lines so I think there's no need to emphasise it even further. I really like your writing so hope you don't mind me commenting like this. All the best, Colin.
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Jemima Jones
Tue 9th May 2017 17:43
really loved this one to pieces Desiree.Thank you.Jemima.