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As A Fragrance Ghost With No Name Drifts By

And whenever I catch a whiff of her perfume,
As a fragrance ghost with no name drifts by,
Time's warped arrow splices,
And Love's atomic clock,
Tock-ticks its anti-clockwise meltdown,

And a handful of forbidden memories escape,
Their ashes regenerate..

Time's never a straight line;
It's a curving upper-cut -
A cosmic smack,
Care of the Bad Karma Police.

I'm not guilty,
Where's my solicitor?

Glowing pearls on a melting boomerang,
Thrown by a dream-time warrior,
At this desert pedestrian..

Such memories:
Lonesome grains of sand more precious than diamond.
The broken windows of space evaporate Time,
And melt away the comic, dark-matter shadow play.
The wistful dolly dagger twists
a charmed feedback loop of deja vu:
Her scent: her phantom touch,
She's not here,
She's not here she is..

 

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suki spangles

Thu 1st Jun 2017 23:17

Thank you David and Rachel. Appreciated!

Suki

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David Blake

Thu 1st Jun 2017 23:02

Brilliant. Just brilliant. 'Tock-ticks' and the final few lines are great.

elPintor

Sun 14th May 2017 03:32

This makes me question if space-time bends just a little in those most memorable moments...as it's been sung, we are all made of stars...

Rachel

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suki spangles

Sat 13th May 2017 23:20

Hi Ray and David,

Ray, it was a piece of spooky synchronicity: I read your poem just before I uploaded this on WoL! I wrote this a few years' ago for my blog and tweaked it a little before posting here.

The idea of time being a curve I got from watching a documentary or ten about the possible nature of time not being linear, and I'm pretty sure I nicked the idea also from a Rush lyric (I forget which one): Time is a spiral/Space is a curve..

I won't bore you with all the other way-out mystical nonsense I enjoy, or I'll probably be banned from WoL!

David,

You're kind of on the money. My thought also was how lost memories arise of an old lost love due to an olfactory smack in the nose, so to speak, reanimates. It's a particular perfume, not sure which one. But you are right: it is amazing how our senses do that. Those memories are just there again: real, but not real; elusive; ghostly..

Also, around the same time I was reading Brian Turner's Phantom Noise, and that subconsciously may have informed the poem too. By the way, I recommend Phantom Noise.

I was also taking the piss out of myself a little, regarding Love: a plea to the karma police!

Cheers!
SS

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raypool

Sat 13th May 2017 21:53

Masterful interplay of lines weave the ghost , flesh hanging on the air - a true sense of poetry playing out. May I ask is your line Time's never a straight line an idea gleaned from my poem To a Curve? It reminded me of that - if it is I take that as a great compliment. No matter!

Poetry is a great melting pot, give it all a stir, and magic comes to the top !

Nice Suki. Ray

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