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Always Mistaken

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Sometimes, often, 


seeing a shaver across the street


a step and a style his own


I stumble at the power of resemblance-


he could so easily be our Daniel.


And here I buckle, stabbed once more


for I realise my mistake: 


Never again can I greet Daniel. Yet,


I'm almost raising my arm


crying across, hello.

 

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kJ Walker

Sun 21st May 2017 19:34

beautiful, but so sad.

Kevin

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raypool

Thu 18th May 2017 21:13

Simple and moving Adam, this speaks for itself . Thanks for sharing.

Ray

Jemima Jones

Thu 18th May 2017 21:09

I really am sorry for you Adam.Its easy for me to say that time is a healer (albeit never completely) but I sincerely hope for you that it does as much as possible in easing your suffering and hopefully as soon as possible.My sympathies.Jemima.

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Thu 18th May 2017 16:53

oh Adam.Lost for words.But not for as much sympathy as my heart has to give you.


Rose

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