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Life´s Span

Life´s Span

 

Childhood is a growing stage

until we reach a certain age

Then we enter adolescence

and feel shy about our very presence

Soon arrives the fullness of maturity

which banishes any vestiges of purity

Later on along life´s lane

we sometimes end up lame

But the end does finally come

when we are all said and done

This experience takes many years

from teddy bears to arm chairs

Can someone tell me what its all about

before I go crazy, yell and shout?

Officially it is called Life´s Span

which we have no choice not even to ban

We arrive, thrive and finally dive

but I fail to see why we even strive

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◄ Soggy goings on...

Fruition ►

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kJ Walker

Tue 23rd May 2017 06:47

Sorry Keith. After a re-read it did scan and all the lines did follow the same pattern. I was just a bit too quick to jump in with my comments. Keep em coming.

Cheers Kevin

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kJ Walker

Mon 22nd May 2017 21:01

I liked this one a lot Keith. The only line I'd probably change is "from teddy bears to arm chairs". I'd have put it onto two lines, and probably stretched it a bit, so it followed the same pattern as the rest of it. (am I being finicky? Sorry)
Cheers Kevin

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