Power
Build me a city on broken dreams
Use the concrete of weaponry and the filling of blood
Trace rivers and shores with the tears of a thousand lost sailors
Build crosswalks at the intersection of emptiness
Place traffic lights to guide motorized souls
Build bridges to nowhere
And walls around collective thought
Carbon capture technology to prevent idea exhaust
From the factories that process differences
Through boilers that generate sameness steam
Build industry laboring for the machinery and architect
Let it be a magnet for migrating segments of the whole
Then erase, redraw, redesign and reshuffle the cards
New rules make the pieces move and new bones crumble
The dust particles of life Pompeii the old way
But new cities rise and fall above it, forgotten
New structures,, more fallen, no change
We wander up and down layers alone,
Marching in time, in perfect step
Army boots heeding a commander
He does not need to see to believe in
With a brigade unknowingly separated by nothing
But the sequence of layers in time
Each uniform glides through broken dreams alone
Climbs hills built with the lives of others
By victors that have long since perished and become new bones
In old machinery that rises only by pushing surrounding land down
Each wanders the banks of once flowing rivers
Admiring the grief of those whose pain has long since been forgotten
Contemplating poems that seem handed down from the sky
Put in my a new city
The soldiers who trudged through constantly perishing cities alone, carrying supplies
Artists who tried to capture the essence of what was with a sketch
The neighbors who warned each other that the landscape was changing
And the gardeners that tried to resculpt the earth
I envision a city where everything intersects with everything else
A people fully encompassed
Kim Whysall-Hammond
Fri 26th May 2017 10:53
An excellent draft of what can be an excellent poem. I loved it a first, but then got lost along the way I'm afraid. My longer poems are like this one at first. Leave it for a while, then look at it again and prune (gently) so that what you are trying to say is clearer.
I don't sometimes realise what a poem of mine is saying until I've read it again a while later.