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Waves

Waves

 

Evidence that creation is not dormant

they are an increasing reminder

of a sweeping movement

in and out, high and low

They are the auspices of the moon

lunar power in constant motion

a rhythm of exorcism

as they cleanse the sand

nature´s absorbent door step

At times they lap gently and quietly

in storms they crash against the immovable shore

with a crest of foam, an erosive force

Skimming across the ocean´s floor

to dissolve into a sandy bed

Never to slumber they remain awake

faithful to their creative role

Back and forth, reliable and true

a source of power long overdue

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◄ All in All

Imagination ►

Comments

<Deleted User> (13762)

Fri 26th May 2017 20:04

surf's up! I'm fascinated by the ancient fossilised remains of water. There is a stream which flows down the side of the hill just a field away from where I live where the rock strata is rippled - evidence I am told that this sloping bit of land was once a flat sub-tropical lagoon. Imprints of humans and dinosaurs and the remains of sunken woodlands exposed at low tide are also wonders to behold as are the petrified forests of baked Arizona. Your poem has me waffling Keith for all the right reasons. Ta, Col.

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Kim Whysall-Hammond

Fri 26th May 2017 10:28

"a rhythm of exorcism as they cleanse the sand" - great phrasing.

A lovely poem.

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