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You make my heart sing

That little voice at the crack of dawn told me I should whizz this off to you:

the change in you is so seductive,

It so stimulates my spirit I want to sing a song for you.

Great to see you follow your dreams,

reach for the starts,

tune in to your heart.

I see you’ve moved to that happier place.

I hear you accept there’s that sacred shrine within you

I gaze in awe as you soar to a higher realm.

I feel my chest explode with happiness for you.

🌷(4)

◄ Listen to your heart petal

I feel you shining in me ►

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<Deleted User> (9882)

Fri 16th Jun 2017 18:24

nearly missed this beaut!






Rose (wild thing-Casserley) x

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Raj Ferds

Thu 8th Jun 2017 12:44

Thank you Jemima for this an all your other encouraging comments. Inspiring!

Be blessed.
Raj

Jemima Jones

Thu 8th Jun 2017 11:53

this could be interpreted as a wonderful message to the whole world Raj as well as to the lucky recipient.Beautiful.Thank you.Jemima.

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Raj Ferds

Thu 8th Jun 2017 11:37

Thank you Kim. Just thought I should put it out there.

More light.
Raj

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Kim Whysall-Hammond

Thu 8th Jun 2017 09:52

Lovely

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