Mum Was Right
We were eight years old.
The beach was bleak and the sand reflected the sky in grey hue.
Emily and I wanted to play
but were told by mum what not to do.
We threw our shoes in the mud.
Sniveling children never listen to their mum
and we found a raft and tied it to a wharf.
We says she can kiss our left bum!
The raft was wooden, square and full of splints
“pain is for grown-ups”, Emily said
We went far from the vision of the shore.
Soon I was filling up with doubt in my button head.
I told Emily, “I want to go back in!”
She says “only a scaredly cat would abandon ship”
Ignoring her refusal
I pulled back on the rope straight to shore
Suddenly the rope snapped and the situation became crucial.
We had lost all hope but
we were snapped up quick
the coastguard came and dropped us home
Mum patterned us with lip-stick.
Mum is always right
Us hooligans should have listened to her words
We could have perished that day
And been one with the birds.
Seán Maguire
Mon 12th Jun 2017 18:05
I love this poem, as a parent and grandparent I smiled reading it. You are a natural storyteller.