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Mum Was Right

We were eight years old.

The beach was bleak and the sand reflected the sky in grey hue.

Emily and I wanted to play

but were told by mum what not to do.

 

We threw our shoes in the mud.

Sniveling children never listen to their mum

and we found a raft and tied it to a wharf.

We says she can kiss our left bum!

 

The raft was wooden, square and full of splints

“pain is for grown-ups”, Emily said

We went far from the vision of the shore.

Soon I was filling up with doubt in my button head.

 

I told Emily, “I want to go back in!”

She says “only a scaredly cat would abandon ship”

Ignoring her refusal

I pulled back on the rope straight to shore

Suddenly the rope snapped and the situation became crucial.

 

We had lost all hope but

we were snapped up quick

the coastguard came and dropped us home

Mum patterned us with lip-stick.

 

Mum is always right

Us hooligans should have listened to her words

We could have perished that day

And been one with the birds.

 

 

 

 

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Seán Maguire

Mon 12th Jun 2017 18:05

I love this poem, as a parent and grandparent I smiled reading it. You are a natural storyteller.

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kJ Walker

Sat 10th Jun 2017 08:03

Mums are always right, but how are you to know that if you don't push the boundaries.
This tale reminds me of the time that I sailed down the river Don on a block of polystyrene. It's the daft things that you do that make you who you are.
This poem made an enjoyable read.
Thank you Kevin

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