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70th BIRTHDAY BALLOON

The birthday balloon

toys with the air

swaying and swooning

tied to a chair.

 

The party's over

time to think

of 70's bright promise

the years just a blink.

 

It dances to a fan

a fandango of heat

head held high

to heart's gentle beat

 

and then quietly subsides

like the huff and puff of age itself.

It's makeup can't be removed

and, slipping sideways in a flap of time

 

recalls perhaps someone

in their former prime.

 

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◄ WE'RE GOING DOWN TO THE COTSWOLDS

AUNT NORA ►

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raypool

Sat 24th Jun 2017 19:15

Hi David, blimey, you have me sussed. Always full of hot air etc..... Goes down, etc. Not my style obviously.
Glad you got the drift mate.!

I'm flattered Michaela to be accorded this compliment . I do my best . I think the subject matter lends itself to descriptive words. Thanks you so much. Don't forget Fuchsia by the way.

Ray with love.

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Michaela Sheldon

Sat 24th Jun 2017 00:14

Wow I loved hearing you read this so much! Such grace and prosperity. Beautifully written

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