pointed are: pointless the persuation,
pointing in our blanks the verse;
the unsaid lines of this invasion
saddend useless with the verbs.
weighted are: exagerated tenses,
waiting in our queue the lines;
the handled change of this deception
worried senseless many times.
<Deleted User> (6510)
Wed 14th Oct 2009 05:21
This is a real head spinner , I get into the poem and then it takes me off in another direction. I like it , it could send you bonkers trying to justify a full meaning and be happy you had done so - it has a lot going on.
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kealan coady
Thu 15th Oct 2009 19:49
brilliant approach the words carry themselves carelessly and effortlessly through the poem.