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She blows hot, blows cold

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Out of nowhere, for no reason I was greeted with a chilly shoulder.

Deafening silence followed all night.

But I accept her in all her swinging moods like nature.

In winter and summer, in rain or dry spells.

I make no attempt to pursue. Or please.

Cause I know that I must raise my consciousness of this charming conundrum

of flight or fight.

So I choose to flow with the tide.

I surf her emotional wave, assured that it will build up, reach the crest

and then drop and ebb.

She’s my angel and I can expect unbridled passion when twilight reaches its climax.

🌷(3)

◄ To my Angel who waits

M'am your poem is served ►

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lynn hahn

Tue 5th Sep 2017 02:33

Really enjoyed this poem. Imagery was soft and sweet. Can I be your best friend?

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Lyrical Lexa

Sun 30th Jul 2017 12:47

I accept all her swinging moods like nature. Beautiful!

<Deleted User> (16513)

Sat 29th Jul 2017 08:49

Seems like all women visiting you here lol! Good luck.

Write more Mr. Chakraj ?

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Raj Ferds

Mon 24th Jul 2017 06:44

Thank you so much Wardah for your observations. Quite perceptive.

I look forward to your next contribution.

Take care
Raj

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Wardah

Sun 23rd Jul 2017 23:15

Enjoyed your comparison of women to natures changing seasons its completely apt. And if only more people knew how to ride that wave with patience and acceptance there would certainly be more lasting relationships.

Looking out for your next piece.

Take care.
Wardah

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Raj Ferds

Thu 6th Jul 2017 19:34

Cheers Cynthia. 'She blows hot, she blows cold' does sound better actually. The dual approach of romantic and realistic seems to work well eh.

Raj

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Thu 6th Jul 2017 11:25

I like it too.

Would you consider 'She blows hot, she blows cold' as the title. Somehow the repeated sound of the 'sh', the feel of it on the tongue, is lovely, breaking the two strong 'blows' in quick succession - unless that is exactly what you want - the sharp sound of wind?

Now that is interesting - like two different approaches to poetry - romantic and realistic.

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Raj Ferds

Sun 2nd Jul 2017 15:20

Thank you Hazel. I like being in the 'Now'. To be a silent observer (or mindful) of the present. To watch and wait in a curious kind of way. .
It does wonders for any relationships because it creates space as you say and at the same time allow it to develop at its own pace without being judgemental.

I'm glad you like it.
Raj

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Hazel ettridge

Sun 2nd Jul 2017 14:35

Lovely images.And great to be able to create so much space in a relationship.

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