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M'am your poem is served

I love you for your quiet confidence that screams reverence

I love you for the courage of you convictions.

For your wayward eyelids as they flap like chrysalis wings.

You make the others look like forgotten minions.

A sense of purpose lurks in the lithe abandon of your walk,

full lips smirking at fate.

I love the triumph of your uninhibited temper

as you make men rattle at their joints

You wear your courage like a battled scar.

Then when the day is done I worship at the altar of your amorous expertise

crowned by those moments when you sprinkle stardust over our crumpled corpuses.

 

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◄ She blows hot, blows cold

Look, now we've gone and upset Irma ►

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Raj Ferds

Wed 6th Sep 2017 14:07

Thank you Wardah. She deserves it. Glad you like it.

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Wardah

Tue 5th Sep 2017 22:14

Love this one ? she's a lucky lady ?
Keep them coming ?

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 30th Jul 2017 12:34

Maybe you want 'corpses'. ie.'dead bodies'? Maybe not.

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Raj Ferds

Sun 30th Jul 2017 06:46

I'm glad you see it that way Jem. This is our wider family and sometimes a bit if emotional nourishment helps.

Love&Light to you my sweet friend.
Raj

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Raj Ferds

Sat 29th Jul 2017 21:03

Cynthia I forgot to thank you for pointing out the missing 'r'.

And oh, corpuses is just a colourful word for bodies. Always good to receive comments from you. You have a sharp eye ... and creative mind.

Raj x

Jemima Jones

Sat 29th Jul 2017 21:02

Raj,perhaps you may not know it but this site will always need your kind of poetry.It can very well be described as the beautiful pourings of soothing and essential oils on troubled waters.Thank you my dear friend.Jemima.

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Raj Ferds

Sat 29th Jul 2017 20:59

Thank you Leon. Appreciate it.

<Deleted User> (17847)

Sat 29th Jul 2017 19:54

what I would kindly describe as soft touch poetry

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Raj Ferds

Sat 29th Jul 2017 17:40

Rosie ma love, glad you like it.
Col thanks for the flattering comment.
MGS welcome back.
Cynthia, yes I am having fun. Point take.

Raj

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 29th Jul 2017 11:58

You are having FUN. Delightfully free and imaginative. Love the title.

Check 'your' for 'r'. What are 'corpuses'?

<Deleted User> (13762)

Sat 29th Jul 2017 09:34

you have such a unique style - keep 'em coming you charmer ?

<Deleted User> (16513)

Sat 29th Jul 2017 08:47

Visiting your page just now @ date: 072917

Here I am
Liking and commenting without hesitating
For a friend I met
In Write Out Loud
A gig I never forget
So as the name Chakraj
Be blessed and be merry
And may life be good to you!

xx -MGS

<Deleted User> (9882)

Sat 29th Jul 2017 00:54

so nice to see genuine,honest,pure poetry like this Raj.



Lotsa love my friend.


Rose ?+? for good luck!

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