Mind Murmur
Stomp, crack, cut the fingers down
Like a tree timbering loud
To drown the deafening sound
Of distorted reasoning.
The pull-patter of lying
That battles inside the mind
Of "you would's" and "you wouldn't's".
These brash, too-nosy thinkings
Will cover (with callous cloud)
Your attractive Sandman dreams.
They will tuck in a snug clump
Next to you at sleepy dusk.
And will murmur horrid words
About the next-to-you mind
As you rise from toss/turn night.
These intramural whispers
Transform the tidy sincere
Into a grimy sewer;
Unkempt and polluted.
So sweep them in a lock shut,
Play pretend in your doll house
And adjust their tiny hands
To fit tight in your full ears.
At least the intrusive thoughts
Will be trimmed to soft muffle,
Only to bother you when
They rot from condensation
And nip off when they dry out.
<Deleted User> (13762)
Tue 18th Jul 2017 08:19
nice flow and word usage / paring - much to admire and come back to. Keep writing like this and you'll not go far wrong.