YOU FALL IN LOVE WITH EYES
You fall in love with eyes
because the eyes have it
they write histories in the making
they are wine for the taking
never perfectly saying no
always willing.
Because the eyes have it
they will follow you in every detail
as you take those histories
and make them futures
until those eyes make light of will
and see you and see you still
behind the grey walls of age still shine.
If love is to fall let it be for eyes
with their histories and wonder
full of wonder
of flesh made thin by history
tragic and sublime
drawing you into the nexus of time.
raypool
Thu 20th Jul 2017 20:31
Hi Rachel pretty much spot on. I think we are drawn in and engulfed by eyes, or rejected. memory too resides in the eyes, as the hands remember actions. Glad you like it.
Col you have hit a spot there I forgive but I can't forget. Once heard that voice really embeds itself. I have strayed onto alternative territory.
That's a great line David. Not heard it before - is it your own, if so to be applauded. Lots of extra possibilities there. Thanks also for likes, Michaela and Patricia!
Love for all Ray