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YOU FALL IN LOVE WITH EYES

You fall in love with eyes

because the eyes have it

they write histories in the making

they are wine for the taking

never perfectly saying no

always willing.

 

Because the eyes have it

they will follow you in every detail

as you take those histories

and make them futures

until those eyes make light of will

and see you and see you still

 

behind the grey walls of age still shine. 

 

If love is to fall let it be for eyes

with their histories and wonder

full of wonder

of flesh made thin by history

tragic and sublime

drawing you into the nexus of time. 

 

 

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raypool

Thu 20th Jul 2017 20:31

Hi Rachel pretty much spot on. I think we are drawn in and engulfed by eyes, or rejected. memory too resides in the eyes, as the hands remember actions. Glad you like it.

Col you have hit a spot there I forgive but I can't forget. Once heard that voice really embeds itself. I have strayed onto alternative territory.

That's a great line David. Not heard it before - is it your own, if so to be applauded. Lots of extra possibilities there. Thanks also for likes, Michaela and Patricia!

Love for all Ray

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Wed 19th Jul 2017 21:56

I admit to reading this in the voice of John Bercow. Please forgive me.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=70opw7t6d5Y

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Rachel Mhlongo

Wed 19th Jul 2017 21:16

This is beautiful ❤ Eyes are really more than what we see in the physical sense, you can fall in love by eyes and remain in love. At least that is what I understood from your poem

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