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THE COLD POOL

The turquoise pool shimmered in the heat haze.

No scent of eucalyptus here though.

This is a roof top pool in New York.

Aroma, instead  of candy floss , sugary sweet.

The busy city below sounding

like a farm yard with the oink oink of car horns.

I apply lip balm and go  for

a hot, strong tea.

The young man with me is

my son and his child.

He has brought me for a few days in New York.

Posh hotel, posh swimming pool.

Next time he may take me

to Tahiti with its hot sand

and warm sea.

 

 

â—„ SPRING

EXTINCT â–º

Comments

Steve Smith

Wed 28th Oct 2009 12:27

An equation poem.Images of warmth over emptiness equals..? poignant.
Steve Smith

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Mon 26th Oct 2009 10:44

This is brilliant with its overtones/undertones of meaning in family relationships and resultant attempted compensations.

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tommyfazz@yahoo.com

Sat 24th Oct 2009 00:36

yeah... 'boom'...

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