Waiting
Waiting
Time passes quite slowly
As everyone sits, trying to be patient
Most read, others fiddle with phones
One young one plays with a hand-held game
My son listens to his ipod, I write
Aged from five to 65
We sit on mismatched brown wooden chairs
Set against a very busy floral patterned carpet
“Flick, flick” reply the thumbed pages
As they waft barely audible music
There is an air of anticipation
As we all look up
After the sound of a magazine
Heavily flopping onto a table
“Will everything be alright? “Are things Stable?”
The long light relentlessly hums,
There’s a wavy thin-striped blind
And the beat of a clock
From a not so distant fire place
This was once a house – another is called
More creaks and lots of nervous repositioning
Just being here causes coughs, sneezes and wheezes
Eyes right as the door handle slowly turns
“Mr White!” my name is called
I get up and reluctantly leave my shifty clan
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 26th Oct 2009 17:50
A marvellous read. What a sense of place and people you have created with your sight and sound details that both create and contradict the overall mood, and so compound the tension. I think the second last verse is a masterful touch.