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Cry Me A River

Cry me a river

Sing me a song

Fire me an arrow

To the centre of the sun

Climb me a mountain

Make me a king

Grant me three wishes

And I'll do anything

From the deepest of oceans

A pearl you must bring

Be my inspiriation

Of your beauty I'll sing

Laugh when my jokes aren't funny

Find a dream we can share

Say you'll never leave me

That you'll always be there

 

◄ Mid Life Crisis

The Ballade of David Keller ►

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Nichola Burrows

Wed 28th Oct 2009 15:00

Neil, you are really a romantic at heart aren't you?
What happened to the languish and anguage?!:-)))))x

You need to put music to this and develop it into a song, very bluesy feel to it.x

<Deleted User> (6353)

Wed 28th Oct 2009 09:58

I love the pace of this poem Neil x

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