Your warmth
permeates my skin
holding my life
within your grace
The beating of your heart
resonates within me
a rhythm of life
that you bestow
Within Your breath
I am breathing
without you
I would never be
So I take from you
what you are giving.
My life,My birth
My destiny
It is an original and brave poem that puts consciousness there in the womb Desmond and as Colin says that sparks strong feelings. I often wonder about previous lives and the continuance of spirit experience so entailed.
Ray
Tue 26th Sep 2017 12:35
Thank you Colin for your comments. I can imagine that your prose night was a very emotive, it is a very controversial subject whether to allow terminations or not. I belive ultimately a woman has the right to choose. But as you say it is a very emotive issue.
As for saying my poem makes you think of Kate Bush's 'Breathing' I take that as a great compliment, she is one of my favorite artists. Thanks, Des.
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Tue 26th Sep 2017 08:39
I was listening to a live reading of a piece of prose last night given by two people - one read the voice of the mother who was waiting to receive the morning after pill and the other read the voice of the unborn child who also lamented the loss of previously terminated siblings. It was very effective and emotive. As is yours Desmond but for obviously different reasons. I can't help but think also of Kate Bush's 'Breathing'. Thanks for posting. All the best, Colin.
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DESMOND CHILDS
Wed 27th Sep 2017 06:15
Hi Ray thanks for your comments. You raise a few big questions there. What is and how do you define conscious.What is life,what happens after we die. So many different answered and opinions are out there.
More controversy. So what’s the answer? Google or Wickapiedia ?
Thanks,Des