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First Snow

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The world has put itself to sleep
under new sheets
and for awhile we can allow ourselves
to forget a few things,
the bright plans of a new year
flown over the roofs
to somewhere south
that welcomes forgetfulness,
leaving only these sparrows
in the bare trees of your expression-
a cupboard of essentials to see out the year.
Enough for this plain soup
to enjoy at a darkened window
watching the snow fall.
The scattered leaves of the yard
the torn out pages of a calendar
being covered over now.

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◄ 2.38 am

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Tom Harding

Wed 27th Sep 2017 22:28

Thanks ray, too kind as usual!

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raypool

Wed 27th Sep 2017 22:10

Wonderfully lyrical Tom. Wraps the reader in a mood and the idea of "plain soup" is almost hermetically religious as if a certain humility has gone into the writing. You have aligned the human condition with a season beautifully.

Ray

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