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HEAVEN SCENT

She glided past me in the street,

Sweet, petite...good enough to eat.

And leaving - to mark where she went -

She left a lingering heavenly scent.

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Martin Elder

Thu 28th Sep 2017 22:04

In Homeric terms she might be described al most as a siren of the sea. Nice one Mark

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M.C. Newberry

Thu 28th Sep 2017 18:03

I was walking to my local surgery when the girl in question
passed me in the opposite direction. She seemed to float
by with a waft of perfume that stayed with me and
certainly brightened up my need to make the trip.
Moments like that are worth writing about.

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John Coopey

Thu 28th Sep 2017 17:14

Yes, I sniff them too, MC.

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