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The Bedsit

 

I put a fifty pound deposit down
A twelve foot square of room
A toilet that doesn’t flush
And a carpet that’s never seen a broom

The refrigerator it has mildew on
The last tenants cooking, is still in the 
pot
And when you’ve seen the forks and
 knives
Well, you’ve seen the forking lot

The mattress is full of pissed stains 
The last host he was on smack
I found his hypodermic needle
When I was scraping out the bath

The bathrooms ceiling leaking
All night it’s drip, drip, drip
I guess this is how a rat must feel 
Before he deserts a sinking ship

A solitary bulb hangs without a
 lampshade
Lighting this sparse and unfurnished
 room
Casting shadows of former residents
Across these botched plastered walls of gloom

The other residents and there are nine
 of them
Like me, they draw the welfare state
They stalk the hall and stairway
For their giro’s they lay in wait

Is this place I’m living in 
The furthest I can fall
Better to have this bed sit I suppose
Than to have no home at all

Better to have this bed sit, I suppose
Than to have no home at all

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Philip Stevens

Mon 2nd Oct 2017 20:48

This one was written from my own personal experience... i left out other experiences of no electric, flea infestations... i could go on... hey ho... what doesn't kill you only makes you stronger or in this case... inspires you put pen to paper

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Philip Stevens

Sat 30th Sep 2017 22:05

Thank you for reading and for the comments

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Sat 30th Sep 2017 18:08

This is so sad but true. Governments have not come to terms with the idea that everyone needs a decent home to live in.
Thank you for writing this .

Hannah

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sat 30th Sep 2017 17:55

Very succinctly put in all its gory detail. The final two lines are an excellent punch line. You have highlighted clearly a disgusting 'trade in rentals'.

And, also, the personal habits of certain people. Many young persons treat their parents' home like a pigpen. And they are allowed to do so. How would you expect them to treat their 'first pad'? It boggles the mind.

Who should be held responsible for 'letting any living space' in this condition, especially the common area like the toilet, dripping ceilings in any area, etc. ? The good news must be that the room itself can be cleaned, and the fridge etc. with a lot of personal effort, yes, but still cleaned.

I often feel real sorry for landlords. Those who rent have responsibilities too. And many don't give a shit about how they treat a rented place. 'Who cares? It's not mine!'

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