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CRYSTAL BALL

In the gypsy lavender scented tent

she gazes into a crystal ball

at a gypsy table with beaded cover

like a stage set of a gypsy's lament

 

Gazes intently with head like an alien

into the squatting orb of the ball

knowing everything and nothing at all

her mind plays tricks

the glass is dark

 

where ocean meets the sky, 

future bleeding with a tremulous sigh

her mind and the stageset perfectly combine

 

words take shape like spittles of air

her brow is furrowed

is the news we await out there?

hands palm up reveal lines of fortune not kind

 

tell me tell me ,    the time is ticking

improvements in your personal life

are overdue, dear and will arrive quite soon.

 

Outside a queue is forming behind the flap

workmen with tools a bluster of sound

shaking the threads

of gypsy promise

loose inside the tent.

 

The lazy eye is clouding over

still she talks to close the session

 

It's a funny old world

the olde worlde

but now the girl with her knees tight pressed

feels quite relieved and somehow thrilled

her pocket and spirit a little lighter,

 

boyfriend restive, on his third cigarette. 

 

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◄ IN THE GARDEN

A VISIT TO BLENHEIM (A Churchill speech) ►

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raypool

Thu 5th Oct 2017 17:16

Thank you Hannah. When we hand anyone the reins we give power to that person; and I am of two minds as to the interplay in these situations. In church, or in a surgery we bow to supremacy (maybe imagined). I'm very pleased it worked for you! To inspire is my desire by the way.

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Thu 5th Oct 2017 13:12

I love this poem. These women are always powerful and any encounter intriguing. Through your words I envisaged the whole scene.

Thank you for your comment on my poem
Strong Vulnerability. I find your words inspiring.

Hannah

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raypool

Tue 3rd Oct 2017 11:35

David, you've gone to the heart of the subject as always. I did get involved in the seedy side of all that and found it a great responsibility and indeed still do when trying to give help of any kind. I larded it with cynicism but the sadness comes I think with juxtaposition of real and unreal or the perceiving or non perceiving of the truth. We are all gullible at times and susceptible to the threat of the future.
Thanks so much mate.

Ray

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raypool

Mon 2nd Oct 2017 15:08

Many thanks Cynthia, praise indeed! It's all a balancing act I hope you agree.

Ray x

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Sun 1st Oct 2017 13:13

Superb 'story'. Very atmospheric ... including 'all' the characters involved ... last line an excellent conclusion. IMO- the whole idea is masterful. You set a fine standard.

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