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Existence

Existence

 

Surrounded

hemmed in

suffocated from life

perpetually a prisoner

from the world about

Encircled by convention

stunted by false love

a self made cell

from which escape

is only for the birds 

of paradise

Pressed down and locked

desires pitted with shame

a weighty past as a 

stone around the neck

Where is the passage

to freedom, the way

of escape or are we

doomed to a fruitless

existence of frustration

and inevitability

Will I ever fly

from the cage

with wings outstretched

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keith jeffries

Fri 20th Oct 2017 11:32

Thanks Jon. Love you lots :Keith

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Philip Stevens

Thu 19th Oct 2017 22:09

Soul bearing stuff thanks for sharing

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Mon 16th Oct 2017 22:38

A beautiful poem. I can feel the yearning for freedom.

Hannah

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Jon

Wed 11th Oct 2017 23:33

Hi again Keith
I really got a lot from 'Existence', and it conveys the sense of struggle and longing very well.
Insightful and moving.
Thanks also for kind comments Keith ?

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