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I have arrived

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And then she wafted into my life. “I’m part of your fate” she whispered.

Day by day I was drawn towards her, as if by instinct. Destiny at work.

This is purely a merger of minds, a merger of values, a merger of all things passionate.

For once, I will not say ‘I love you’ or ‘I need you’ but instead ‘I believe in you’.

Already I feel the immeasurable power of her inner beauty pervade my spirit

and loving her has gone beyond my control.

I am blessed.

🌷(5)

◄ Going within -- and without.

Tantric Tandem ►

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Raj Ferds

Mon 16th Oct 2017 10:22

Always good to get positive feedback so a big thank you to you Wardah and Hannah.

Let's all rise to a higher ground.

Raj

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Sun 15th Oct 2017 20:42

'I believe in you'
That is a beautiful thing to say to someone.
Loved this one.

Hannah

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Wardah

Thu 12th Oct 2017 14:04

This is beautiful. I'm glad all your confusion has dissipated. But don't love too quickly dear Raj. Good things take time.

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