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21st September

They were all in mourning that morning.

The beetle scurrying across the cooling sands

sombrely dressed in total black

for the occasion.

They were all in mourning that morning.

The sea daffodils had lost their candid silk

leaving purses of jetty seeds

as their bequethal.

They were all in mourning that morning.

The woeful hawkers from much harsher lands

left without takers for tawdry trinkets

just wistful pearly smiles.

They were all in mourning that morning.

The dusky snaketail slithering reedwise

ebony coots with widows' peaks

in the pewter creek.

They were all in mourning that morning.

Sable swan with eyes redrimmed from tears

but bold scarlet mouth

once proudly flaunted.

 

For the death of summer

they were all in mourning that morning.

 

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kJ Walker

Sun 5th Nov 2017 18:06

I really thought it was going to be a person that they were all mourning. I did like the descriptions.

Only this week I was speaking to a lady who was recently widowed, she was convinced that a new star came out on the day of her husband's death, and only reappears on the anniversary


I liked the poem by the way, especially the first line

Cheers Kevin

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Cynthia Buell Thomas

Fri 3rd Nov 2017 21:21

You have a fine feel for evocative imagery, fresh and effective words. Originality and humour. I can't believe no one else has commented appreciatively. But they will.

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