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Acid mothers Temple, Lewes, 18/10/17

I see the backs of people’s heads like a bubbling pan of milk

while the band are weaving filamental feelings into a new sort of music

against the black backdrop, a display cloth sharply presenting bewhiskered jewels

and battered gear sprouting curly leads and lights.

The sounds sweep around the room like a flock of excited ravens

spinning spells, murmuring then cawing idiosyncratic secrets into each of our open ears.

Boiling milk and swirlng ravens, whiteness and blackness and all in between.

The crowd reeks gently of sweat,

faint taints of ancient patchouli,

and the sweetness of beer from plastic cups

while the ghostly gusts of smoky gigs haunt us

in the scented clouds of dancing vapers.

The hard wooden floor bounces beneath me

and I reel with the accidental barges of the bubbling crowd

as my heart joins the swirling flock

and The Great Om Riff sweeps across the room Japanese style.

Above the boiling and the steam and smoke I taste the breath of heaven.

All is exactly as it is.

 

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◄ An Angel

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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 20th Oct 2017 21:04

Thanks Stu, glad you liked it, always worth digging out your old Gong

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Stu Buck

Fri 20th Oct 2017 15:02

wonderful. my first ever gig was the grateful dead when i was 10. i never quite recovered, and camembert electrique by gong is being dug out tonight just to be able to read this while listening.

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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 20th Oct 2017 10:55

Thanks Laura - I came away from the gig knowing I had to catch it somehow!

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Laura Taylor

Fri 20th Oct 2017 09:36

Great idea for a poem! You capture the night well. I've seen Damo Suzuki several times, and he always manages to make me lose my shit ? Also lucky enough to catch a jampacked gig at a festie a few years ago by System 7.

<Deleted User> (13762)

Fri 20th Oct 2017 08:31

more like Flying Teapot David!

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David Taylor-Jones

Fri 20th Oct 2017 07:47

Thanks for your comments Suki, much appreciated

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suki spangles

Fri 20th Oct 2017 04:30

Nice write David. really enjoyed this - wonderful descriptive imagery.

Suki

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David Taylor-Jones

Thu 19th Oct 2017 20:58

Perfect Colin - another Pot Headed pixie!

<Deleted User> (13762)

Thu 19th Oct 2017 19:28

you have me reaching for my old Gong LP's David ?

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