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Poem in Progress E

Sometimes you just have to 
throw your cards 
against the wind 
and watch where they land 
six plus five is eleven 
shows me where to dive 
how to jump 
blind 

deep inside 
the mirror behind 
the future a wall 
blank 

white 
tall. 

 

©JM. Cole 

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Martin Elder

Sun 22nd Oct 2017 18:05

I like the turn and use of words with this, but can't help feeling there should be more. or maybe that is your intention to eave the reader wanting more. Just a thought.
But I like it none the less.

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