Poem in Progress E
Sometimes you just have to
throw your cards
against the wind
and watch where they land
six plus five is eleven
shows me where to dive
how to jump
blind
deep inside
the mirror behind
the future a wall
blank
white
tall.
©JM. Cole
Martin Elder
Sun 22nd Oct 2017 18:05
I like the turn and use of words with this, but can't help feeling there should be more. or maybe that is your intention to eave the reader wanting more. Just a thought.
But I like it none the less.