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The bells they ring

The bells sing out

From the old clock tower

Their ringing ready greeting

Whilst the flowers in metal pots

Keep vigil at the graves looking fresh and bright

And the bridal party are sinking a few

Across the road at the pub

The pale green 1920’s car waits expectantly

Button hole and carnations abound

Everybody dressed to the nines

Morning suits and swooning gowns

Brush against each other

In the organised scrum of merry faces

Just one more before the vows

The rings and for evermore

No longer to be apart

Captured in snapshot

Frozen surprise

Smiling and bewildered

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◄ Tramping

Dance of death ►

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Martin Elder

Tue 9th Jan 2018 22:31

Thanks John , much appreciated

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john short

Tue 9th Jan 2018 22:02

This is quite a good poem Martin, very atmospheric. It transports you right into the scene.

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Jon

Tue 21st Nov 2017 08:10

Hi Martin
I really enjoyed reading this poem. Very atmospheric and vividly described.

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Martin Elder

Wed 1st Nov 2017 23:06

Thanks for reading David Colin, David and Andy. Glad you liked it Andy
I am sorry it reminded you of your now present feelings towards weddings David.
For me this was a scene I witnessed recently driving by the church and perhaps drawing a bit of artistic licence from what I saw and heard
Thanks again for reading fellas
cheers
Martin

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Andy N

Tue 31st Oct 2017 12:42

great piece, martin. can really hear your voice in this. hope you read this at Stockport soon.

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