The Rat Race
The Rat Race
I am spun like a spinning top
my vision blurred almost to blindness
I hear nothing but the whir of the top
I am overcome with a sense of nausea
I beg for it to stop and set me free
In time the revolutions lessen
some vision is restored
Then I am still, unsteady, off balance
as I focus on my surroundings
Anxiety and the need to lie down
overcome is all I feel
The spinning top is ubiquitous
it consumes and holds us fast
When released we are disorientated
unable to concentrate or focus
attention spans are diminished
The mouse on the treadmill
is similarly caught in his spinning top
When released he is good for nothing
There can be no recreation or creative pursuit
Even appetite is gone
We have come close to insanity
to losing our identity
and purpose in life
We are in the cauldron of self destruction
encased in the final spin
where quality of life is cast aside
We can only be productive in the spinning top
beyond that hope of more
has been abandoned
keith jeffries
Sun 5th Nov 2017 14:29
Aaishah, Thank you for your comment. Keith