Perceptions
He came to pick me up
tall athletic blond blue-eyed
with green sports car and dinner jacket
high society stuff.
You're gorgeous he said
and immodestly I agreed.
We spent all the party-time entwined
dancing touching talking kissing.
Then snail-like home and said goodnight
lustfully intending to go much further
after his threatening exams.
A few weeks later the doorbell rang
and being unpresentable I peeped out.
What a wimp! I thought. Who could it be?
Then saw outside a green sports car
but the door stayed firmly shut.
Had it been only the stars the music
the champagne and the jasmine-scented garden?
How unfaithful our perceptions are!
How deceiving is a summer night !
The door was not flung gladly open
He didn't have the magic words
What might have been was not.
Cynthia Buell Thomas
Mon 6th Nov 2017 19:42
Delightful, fast and pointed. With much flair for words. Great ending.
Do you mean 'unpresentable' (which my computer rejects) or is it a word I just don't know?