tell me
Is there anything that hurts more
than to know
you mean nothing
to the person who
means so much
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Hope lives in hope!
I like the brevity of this bit of reality.
I would have put "means" in the final line to maintain the theme.
But that's purely a personal view.
Thu 9th Nov 2017 10:31
nothing higher or deeper than the height and depths of spurned love Jenn.Thank you.Jemima.
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Jennifer Seguin
Thu 9th Nov 2017 19:40
MC thank you I like that suggestion very much!