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Destiny

The rudder broke and disappeared

out at sea the ship drifted aimlessly

The captain faced uncertainty

as the engine faltered also

Disagreement on the bridge

fuel perilously low

Fever breaks out below decks

it is highly contagious

Sails are raised but torn

no whisper of wind apparent

Radio reports pirates are close

The ship carries gold bullion

Water trickles into the hold

as the ship begins to list

The outlook is bleak

no contingency plans exist

Insufficient life boats and jackets

destroy any vestige of hope

panic simmers beneath the surface

of fearful hearts

No longer seaworthy

a storm threatens

The horizon is dark and foreboding

Impending doom creates more fear

Gold in plenty has no value

It will sink with all hope lost

🌷(3)

◄ The Passage of Time

Enveloped in Darkness ►

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keith jeffries

Mon 20th Nov 2017 18:48

Jon and Ryan, thank you both for your comments. As always they are much appreciated and valued. Keith

Ryan

Mon 20th Nov 2017 18:26

Perfect. That was "gold". Well done mate

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Jon

Mon 20th Nov 2017 18:24

Hi Keith,
Really well worded poem this. A sad but true ending conveys the pointlessness of treasure when the end is near. Nice one mate. Hope you're doing well. ?

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