Donations are essential to keep Write Out Loud going    

Enveloped in Darkness

The night is polluted with light

until I clamber up to the tree line

where darkness is a shroud

covering the silhouettes of the pines

Stillness and silence are all pervasive

solitude becomes my cloak of warmth

Flora and fauna slumber in sacred sleep

An oasis of unadulterated nature

fearless I embrace its sanctity

A welcome drenches my soul

I am so close to my original abode

unfettered, free and at peace

Only the dawn can intrude

to reawaken my senses

and banish my spiralling dreams

Long may this night last

fuel to my inner being and a release

from a world gone mad

🌷(5)

◄ Destiny

People Watching ►

Comments

Profile image

keith jeffries

Thu 23rd Nov 2017 22:06

Chuma, thank you for your comment. Keith

Profile image

keith jeffries

Mon 20th Nov 2017 21:50

Robert & Martin, thank you both for your kind comments. Keith

Profile image

Robert Mann

Mon 20th Nov 2017 20:23

Keith - I sensed the military background in this piece (before I confirmed it on your profile). The need for solitude, away from the madness, sought as release from the 'white noise' and man-made hum and buzz, speaks of having seen and heard too much. Plus, some of the terminology is as recognisable as a cap badge. I liked this piece a lot, and will echo Martin in saying that your work gets better and better.
Rob

Profile image

Martin Elder

Mon 20th Nov 2017 20:05

I am totally with you with this Keith, wonderfully put. It is such a pleasure to watch your poetry go from strength to strength
Nice one

If you wish to post a comment you must login.

This site uses cookies. By continuing to browse, you are agreeing to our use of cookies.

Find out more Hide this message